Search The Blog

Tuesday, September 9, 2014

09.09 - "2081" (Part Two)

We started today's class by watching "2081" the short film adaptation of Vonnegut's "Harrison Bergeron." After watching the film, everyone filled out a plot diagram for the adaptation. We then spent some time as a class discussing changes that were made in adapting the short story and how those seemed to affect the story. Everyone then had the remaining time in class to respond to the prompt below:


What meaningful changes were made in adapting “Harrison Bergeron” into “2081” and how do these changes affect the message of the story?

In your discussion, you may want to discuss the meaning of these key quotes from the film:

Harrison: “Let us shine a light so that at last all the world can see”
Sign Stencil:  “Live free or die... for death is not the worst of evils”
Hazel: “You should forget sad things anyway, I always do”


If you did not finish your response to the "2081" message prompt in class, do so for homework.

Read to page 79 in The Giver (due Wednesday).


Complete revisions for your summer assignment essay on A Separate Peace (due Friday)

Monday, September 8, 2014

09.08 - 2081 (Part I)

We started today's class by looking at some roots and prefix review tests from last year to see what people had remembered. We corrected these tests and talked about the answers in class (this was not for credit, just for fun and to check on retention).

Next, people worked with a partner to review the main plot points of "Harrison Bergeron." We discussed these plot points in class and then began watching a film adaptation of the short story called, "2081." We will finish this short film tomorrow and compare the affects of changes in the plot to the overall message of the story.

Handouts:
"Harrison Bergeron" and "2081" plot outline

Homework:
Read to page 79 in The Giver for Wednesday.

Friday, September 5, 2014

09.04 - Harrison Bergeron Writing

Today, people had the period to work on their Harrison Bergeron essays (prompt given below).
During class I handed out copies of The Giver with the reading schedule for the book and this weekends assignment (included below). I also handed out sticky notes to use in completing the reading homework.

Handouts:
"Harrison Bergeron" essay prompt

Homework:

The Giver
Reading Schedule

Read for:
Mon - 9/08
Wed - 9/10
Fri- 9/12
Mon- 9/15
Chapters
1, 2, 3, 4, 5
6, 7, 8,9, 10
11, 12, 13, 14, 15
16 - 23 (End)
Pages
1-39
40-79
80-120
121- 179 (End)
Total length
40 pages
40 pages
40 pages
58 pages

For Monday 9/08 -
Write on and insert sticky notes in appropriate places answering the following question:
What general principles and specific rules are in place that are intended to make this society a utopia?

Wednesday, September 3, 2014

09.03 - Utopias

Everyone responded to the following prompt at the beginning of today's class:

If you could be the person to create a more perfect world, what would that world (or country) look like?
What would it take to make this possible (think about the role of government, employment, education, religion, technology, food supply, leisure time, etc)?

Everyone had ten minutes to respond to this prompt. Next, people got together in groups of three and shared the worlds we had come up with. Groups were then presented with a discussion question looking at various aspects of society and coming up with how this would be treated in a more perfect world. Elements we looked at were the role of: government, religion, employment, and technology.

In the last ten minutes of class, we began talking about Thomas More's Utopia and his intentions in writing the story. For homework, everyone should read the text about More's Utopia provided in class and come up with three arguments around why his model for society would or would not make a more perfect society.

Handouts:
Information on Thomas More's Utopia


Homework:

Read the handout on More's Utopia provided in class and come up with three arguments regarding why this model for society would or would not make for a better world.

Continue revisions on your essay for A Separate Peace. Revisions are due Friday, 9/12.
If you did not originally submit an essay you may submit the essay by Friday, 9/12, but will not have an opportunity for revision.

Tuesday, September 2, 2014

09.02 - Revision

We started today's class with everyone responding to the following prompt in their writer's journal:

How do you go about revising your work...
before it is officially submitted
after you have received assessment

After everyone had a chance to respond to this prompt, we discussed different people's responses and recorded these on the board. Some of the responses included:
- -read what I wrote looking for specific sorts of mistakes (spelling, grammar mistakes)
- re-read what I wrote asking myself "does this make sense"
- re-read what I wrote asking myself, "is this the best it could be" and then make changes based on my answer
- have someone else read what I wrote
- read my writing out loud to myself to see if it actually sounds good
- read my writing out loud to someone else and see if they think it sounds good or if they have questions
- pause during my writing and then when I start again re-read everything to get started again and see if it still makes sense

Next we watched a video about effective approaches to the revision process (see below). This video is of Ron Berger who works for the Expeditionary Learning organization talking to elementary school students about revision and critique. While the video is of elementary school students, its audience is teachers. The video is trying to pitch this model of education to teachers. With that in mind, everyone was asked to watch the video and then respond to the following question:

What approach to revision is this video advocating?
 Be sure to identify specific features of this approach.


After watching this video, we discussed everyone's responses to this video.

Next, we reviewed responses to the quiz on A Separate Peace and Hamilton's Mythology from last week. I then returned essays and updated grade report sheets. Everyone had the last ten minutes of the period to review feedback on the paper and then plan their revisions according to our discussion today of the revision process. I met individually with students to answer questions about essays and quizzes.

Homework:

Begin revisions on your essay for A Separate Peace. Revisions are due Friday, 9/12.
If you did not originally submit an essay you may submit the essay by Friday, 9/12, but will not have an opportunity for revision.


Friday, August 29, 2014

8/29 - Mythology and Separate Peace Quiz

Today in class everyone took the quiz on A Separate Peace and Edith Hamilton's Mythology. The quiz took the entire class. If you were not in class today to take the quiz, come in and see me (Mr. Collins) as soon as you can.

At the end of class, I handed out a sheet of questions titled "Getting to Know the Class Site." Everyone should use the questions on this sheet to guide their exploration of the class site this weekend.

In doing so, you will notice that all of the posts are still up from the English 10 class that I had last year. You will only ever need to look at posts from August of this year through the rest of our time together (June 2015). Looking at older posts from my previous class will help you learn about how this site works so feel free to travel back in time.

Handouts:
Getting to Know the Class Site

Homework:
Have a writer's journal for English class on Tuesday.
Complete the "Getting to Know the Class Site" sheet (we'll go over this on Tuesday).

Thursday, August 28, 2014

08.27-28 - Course Introduction

Our introductory class was spread across two days and was dedicated to introducing the course material and reviewing classroom policies and procedures. I also took some time to introduce myself to students and talk about my approach to English education.

We started class by having everyone watch the video below of Yngwie J. Malmsteen performing his piece "Icarus Dream Fanfare." 


Everyone responded to the following question in response to this video:
1 - What do you think of this piece of music? (Explain your response as best as you can).

I then talked about how this video represents the way in which we'll be approaching English through this class this year. The symphony representing the traditional/classic elements of an English education and the electric guitar representing new/radical materials that will be used to compliment the traditional/classic elements.

We then reviewed the course syllabus and went over other, more general classroom policies.

We then had a discussion about why we are all here at school and what various reasons contribute to even having schools in the first place. I then presented school from my own perspective as being like Willy Wonka and his chocolate factory. In this way, school is kind of like the Chocolate Factory in which students are coming in to learn how to take things over. In school, students learn everything they need to know to take the world over from the older generation (and hopefully do a better job of managing things).



Next, we looked at the poem "There Are too Many of Me" by Lucy Diggs Slowe. I read through the poem twice and then everyone responded to the following questions.

1 - What is this poem about? How do you know?
2 - What do you think of this message?

After responding to these questions, people discussed their responses with a partner and then we came together as a class and discussed everyone's responses as a class.

This discussion lead into my presentation of who I am as a teacher as we talk about the multiple selves that everyone manages in our everyday lives. I presented myself as a son, brother, uncle, husband, runner, traveler, gamer, and teacher. I then spoke about how my "teacher" self is the self that I always present at school just as everyone's "student" self is the self they are presenting in class. While this is the version of ourselves that we portray in this environment, versions of our other selves can add to and strengthen this professional self. This lead to everyone writing a letter to me about their other selves (prompt below) and how that relates to their student self.



Letters could be submitted at the end of class or finished and turned in later if need be.
(This writing is not assessed, it is just for me to get to know students).

Handouts:

Homework:
For Friday - turn in your summer essay on "A Separate Peace"
For Friday - be ready for the summer reading quiz
For Monday - have a writing journal that you can use of this class (see Mr. Collins if this is difficult for you)